The Lifestar of Aquaplue
Posted: Friday, December 04, 2009
by The poet cj Lee
Of waters so lovely and skies bright blue.
Comes a terrific tale from Aquaplue.
A beautiful island planet so far, far away.
Most beautiful planet ever , one might say.
73% water and 27% land.
Inhabited by all gorgeous woman, and one legendary man.
Some time ago , over a course of many years.
Two male heroes parted company from their female peers.
Split image exactness. teeth,skin and bone.
Actions and mannerisms, totally intact.
The new male existence, cloned to be perfect.
The early years brought pampering and love.
Abundance of affection and whatever he could think of.
Living so well, he was truly a life czar.
Well loved enough to be called their Lifestar.
Whence a day a female commander came calling.
Pounded his chest, Lifestar went falling.
Once up he grabbed her and took her down.
She was strong enough to reverse him, took him to the ground.
She picked him up and tossed him aside.
Needed him to listen , be attentive and abide.
When he rushed towards her, she lowered her head.
After the collision, the female was dead.
Her name was 'Goodness' , one beauty did say.
Will you leave us said another, be on your way.
Goodness was gone, Aquaplue did mourn.
On their lovely planet, a clone of evil was born.
For days they hugged and for nights they caressed.
Terribly sad was the loss of their darling Goodness.
Asking Lifestar to find a place to take her.
Reminding him the planet could never shed the despair.
Finally departing, in his arms Goodness.
Hoping at least to end the duress.
After a few miles, realizing how she had died.
Lifestar just stopped, then cried and cried.
After a week and several long days sobbing over her.
He heard a voice saying I knew you would care.
Goodness, said Lifestar you are alive.
Yes said Goodness and forever by your side.
Hearing the contingent of beautiful ladies cheers.
And knowing they've tested their love and ended their fears.
Informing the dosing of Goodness to be knocked out on impact.
To be revived only by love and emotion which no Aquapluian lacked.
Aquaplue has the Lifestar of complete hero endeavor.
Cloned from Swytestar and Powergent, all heroes forever.
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Top-level comments on this article: (1 total)CJ -- This is very good. Very ingenious, well thought-of subject. Thank you for sharing this to us. Well-written and you are a great story-teller. Best regards to you and yours, ~Nenita~
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